Original song about adoption

My two older siblings are adopted so I have always been very appreciative to both my parents who adopted them, and also towards their birth parents who made the selfless choice to place them with an adoptive family. I am a musical theater songwriter and I decided to write a song from the point of view of a young birthmother reasoning with her boyfriend about what to do with the baby. It is based on the story of my sister's birthparents. I thought this would be a perfect place to share the song! Let me know what you think! ps I'm playing the piano so you can't see me in the video. [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VziJpy_NOVg&feature=player_embedded]YouTube - ‪(ORIGINAL SONG) Give Her Up‬‏[/url] Here are the lyrics: Give Her Up David, would you mind stayin' for a while? You don't have to talk if you don't want to talk but pushing this aside will not make things alright. I've tested twice plus lately I'm not feeling well in the mornings. It's time now to decide what happens down the line. Our baby, our baby's gonna need your love What if we're too young to be that strong. So maybe, just maybe as a part of growing up we should give her life - then, give her up. Dave, I feel like lately we've been slowly drifting apart which makes me wonder how you'll be here a year from now. 'Cause baby, our baby needs a mom and dad, needs a life that we just can't provide. So maybe, just maybe this is not our time. Maybe we're not meant to raise this child. Say we're fine We're still in control Hold my hand! I can't be alone! Baby, my baby, we make mistakes So baby, my baby, I'll bear the ache for both our sakes while someone takes you, baby. My baby. My baby.