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I just began searching for my birthson (born 5/3/1984 in Santa Rosa, CA) in earnest. I have written the following letter to his adoptive parents in the hopes that the adoption agency will forward it to them. If you got this letter as an a/parent, what would you think? I appreciate your insight. :) **************************************************** August 2, 2003 It is difficult to write a such a personal letter to people I have never met. I can't even greet you properly, as I dont know your names. What I do know, though, is that we have a common tie. You are the parents of a boy (now a man) I relinquished for adoption a little over 19 years ago. First, I want to thank you for saving your son's life. I don't know how much of my story you know. I was considered a "good girl," and my pregnancy at 16 was a shock to everyone who knew me. It was even a shock to me, and I was in denial for most of it. Once I finally faced the fact that I was having a baby , for goodness sakes!, I knew right away that adoption was my only choice. Had that option not been available to me, I don't know where your child would be today. Over the past nineteen years, I've thought of your son often. I marveled at how much he looked like me when I received the last picture through the adoption agency a little over 17 years ago. When I sent my own son to his first day of kindergarten, I thought of you and your son, and knew that you must have felt the same first-day jitters as I did at that moment. When country singer Michelle Wright came out with the song, "He Would Be Sixteen," I thought of your son. (And I hoped with all my might that he wasn't doing what I had been doing when I was 16!) When his 18th birthday rolled around, I knew that I could start searching, but I hesitated. Graduating from high school, heading for college҅he didn't need me to fall out of the sky during all that transitional upheaval. But I never stopped thinking about him. A few weeks ago, after watching a news program about adoption reunions both good and bad, I decided that I would begin my search in earnest. I knew, though, that I would contact his parents first. While I gave birth to him, he will always be your son. Even knowing that you were honest with your son when it came to how he became a part of your family, I also know hearing from me probably terrifies you on a very primal and deep level. The adoption of a child is a wonderful and joyous occasion, but the road to adoption is often fraught with an incredible amount of pain and loss. I'm not here to open those wounds again; please know that I would never try to "take him back." He's not mine to take. You are his parents I am not. I have no fantasies of being "co-moms" or of becoming one big happy extended family. I do want to meet him, though. I want to see if he shares my freckles, and if he managed to dodge the gene that made me a complete idiot when it came to math. I want him to have the opportunity to meet his half-brother and his half-sister, and to have his questions about the rest of his gene pool answered. Most of all, I want to thank his parents for giving him the life that I couldn't. In the hopes that the adoption agency won't consider it to be "identifying information" because it really doesn't identify me, my email address is rebelfanjenny@hotmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Jennelle Mihalovits